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Hmm I like the idea of the recognition that the voice was yours, but why title it "her voice" ?

Did you know in the first stanza you had "you" on every second line, which I thought was very clever, maybe you could continue that pattern?

Hello Your title was interesting "I'll always be your friend" I feel it doesn't connect to the poem...however I did connect to the poem in general, I know plenty of ...