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I really loved it and kept me laughing all the way through! I noticed that you used the word "scared or fear" a lot. This can be repetitive and it ...

[quote] I was a fantasy dreamed in the mind of a delusional person, a mere idea manifested into an entity. [\quote] I just loved how god called his own creator ...

I really liked it and seemed very funny. The starting is very interesting and I like he you jump right into the story. [quote] “I’m supposed to be removing you ...

Hi Spearmint! I really liked this one and it was really funny. The writing was also fluid and easy to understand. [quote] “So,” the knight said, “now is actually the ...

I really enjoyed the whoopee cushion scene, it was quite funny. Another thing I really enjoyed was that instead of directly revealing how Margot found the shock pen, you imply ...