Rocklobster

This poem is awesome. I love it so much! It's adorable and romantic and clever. And it rhymes without even having to force it or anything, good job!

Woah. This is deep. And amaaaaaazing. Very good. Great imagrey, I could see the whole thing in my mind, it was amazing. I love poems, and this one especially. Very ...

Very nice. I like the simplicity of it. It was really nice. Is this a novel, or just a poem? I think it could be the beginning (like a prolouge ...

HOLY CRAP. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I personally love things about kidnapping and stuff (I'm not a creeper or anything, I just find ...

Hello! This is pretty short, but obviously that's because it's a prolouge. Anyways, I think its a good idea for a book and stuff, but I can't write much here ...

I enjoyed this. Of course, I enjoy everything Harry Potter, but that's beside the point. I love love love how she's a hufflepuff, because, well, I'm a hufflepuff (Hufflepuff's unite!) ...

WONDERFUL. This isn't like all the other HP fanfiction, because you've created a completely new character, and I think that's fantastic. Please please please write more! I was on the ...

“Parker, do you ever worry that one day the stars will just be…gone?” Parker bites his upper lip and laughs. “No, silly the-the stars can’t be, they stay. Silly.” I ...

Your eight year old brother wrote this?? If so, he's good. I really liked this, it seemed not to stray too far from Percy Jackson and the Olympians, but it ...

This is FABULOUS. I love Harry Potter, and this is by far the best HP fanfiction I've read so far. It seems so realistic, like this is what really happened ...

So, I like the idea of this. I'm a huge HP fan, so I love reading Harry Potter fanfiction. I thought the writing was good, but you had a few ...

Wow. Your really good at describing things. It was like I could see your words in my mind. I really liked that, it was very interesting and the end was ...

Hey guys, thanks so much for your comments. You asked about the formatting, and I did it that way because that's how things look when I think them up in ...

I really enjoyed this story. It was fun to read, and I didn't want to stop. I hope there's more coming. I don't really have much critism, because it was ...

So, I was just painting my nails last night and the exact same stuff happened...I like this. It's funny and very entertaining. I enjoyed it. So yes.