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Just a note, for some reason, these stanzas are not spaced out. They should be. So please don't say, "why didn't you break up the lines?" I do not know ...

Have you ever felt that need inside? Like you just want someone’s chest to cry into, And a solid body to hug that’s not your mom? You have that gut ...

That was very good! I like the way the mother, an ex supermodel, was portrayed. She's a stepmom, right? Very realitic characters, keep it up! ~Rocking Writer~

Mothers tell you they love you. In more ways than one. There's the pure love they radiate that comes from caring for you. There's also that understood love that they'll ...

AN Just a note. These are supposed to be spaced out stanzas, sorry!

Imperfection Imperfection is when you ran up and down the aisles at church when you were three. When you cried on the first day of kindergarten because your mom wasn’t ...

Hi there! Let's see, your poem... Maybe seperate some things, they're kind of in a big blob. I liked the poem but since it's about a certain person, I feel ...

This was a very good poem that captures many feelings. The emotions were good, you just need to check your spelling and punctuation. I especially like the part about being ...

If only you knew. The way you smile that makes me happy. The way your eyes shine when you laugh. The way my heart beats when you’re near. The way ...

Very well written! *Applause* I loved the part about the hourglass being glued down. Beautiful. I love this poem! ~Rocking Writer~ :D

I really liked it! It was an interesting way to think of this simple object. Only thing that I would change is grammer. A few of the 'its' needed apostrophes, ...