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Rivercool99

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Cutter

    Undeniably a poem I have just fell in love with. Beautiful descriptions and metaphors. Didn't really understand the storyline but a lot of poems have one. I take my hat ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Re-Creation Comet

    I like your hard science writing you obviously did you research. I also like how you described the comet. I would recommend a little bit of editing in some parts, ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Fleirzon: People of the Skies ) 10

    Amazing descriptions and characters I love it. Reminds me of Lord of the Rings

    Jun 4, 2010


How can I be king of the world? Because I am king of rubbish. And rubbish is what the world is made of.
— Kate DiCamillo, The Miraculous Journey of Edward Tulane