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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Reality, A Novela

    Thanks for the reviews. I kind of had an inspiration to write this because I was looking over on my other story, and I realized that I really didn't have ...

    Nov 23, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Reality, A Novela

    That swift Georgia breeze carried my resentment with it. Reaching into the depths of my closed mind, I can’t tell you why I possessed such quantities of hatred for the ...

    Nov 23, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Pig Droppings [Closed]

    Hallo!! :] I only have one review for my story so it'd be cool if I got another? *poke* Name: Nourishing a Life Genre: Suspense Summary: Girl's sister is shot, ...

    Jul 24, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Nourishing a Life

    Anyone else care to review? :]

    Jul 23, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Nourishing a Life

    Thanks so so much for the review! I know it's kind of long so people don't want to read it, but please take the time to! Your review made great ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Nourishing a Life

    okay then.

    Jul 23, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Nourishing a Life

    Anyone want to review? I know it's long but it would help me write :-]

    Jul 23, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Nourishing a Life

    The chapters are short, I know. I'm not intending for this to be a 200 page novel or anything, but we'll see where my mind takes me. I'm 13, and ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Blood Lust

    I really really liked this poem. It made me feel as if I were you... I'm a girl. That's awkward. Haha. No, really. My favorite line was, "Your hair carries ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The White One

    It's pretty good, the only thing is that you go from past tense to present tense and it makes the reader a little confused. Other than that, fluent poem and ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: me, myself and I

    Hey! I really liked your poem! I was pleasantly surprised I must say. I loved that glass wall line. Somewhat cliche, but nice. I also enjoyed the ending line. I ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    Hey! I'm new, of course, or I wouldn't be on this thread! :]. I'm going to post one of my stories here and see what people think. Hopefully y'all will ...

    Jul 23, 2009


worlds buzz over us like bees, / we be splendid in new bones.
— Lucille Clifton