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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Reality, A Novela

    Thanks for the reviews. I kind of had an inspiration to write this because I was looking over on my other story, and I realized that I really didn't have ...

    Nov 23, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Reality, A Novela

    That swift Georgia breeze carried my resentment with it. Reaching into the depths of my closed mind, I can’t tell you why I possessed such quantities of hatred for the ...

    Nov 23, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Pig Droppings [Closed]

    Hallo!! :] I only have one review for my story so it'd be cool if I got another? *poke* Name: Nourishing a Life Genre: Suspense Summary: Girl's sister is shot, ...

    Jul 24, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Nourishing a Life

    Anyone else care to review? :]

    Jul 23, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Nourishing a Life

    Thanks so so much for the review! I know it's kind of long so people don't want to read it, but please take the time to! Your review made great ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Nourishing a Life

    okay then.

    Jul 23, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Nourishing a Life

    Anyone want to review? I know it's long but it would help me write :-]

    Jul 23, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Nourishing a Life

    The chapters are short, I know. I'm not intending for this to be a 200 page novel or anything, but we'll see where my mind takes me. I'm 13, and ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Blood Lust

    I really really liked this poem. It made me feel as if I were you... I'm a girl. That's awkward. Haha. No, really. My favorite line was, "Your hair carries ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The White One

    It's pretty good, the only thing is that you go from past tense to present tense and it makes the reader a little confused. Other than that, fluent poem and ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: me, myself and I

    Hey! I really liked your poem! I was pleasantly surprised I must say. I loved that glass wall line. Somewhat cliche, but nice. I also enjoyed the ending line. I ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    Hey! I'm new, of course, or I wouldn't be on this thread! :]. I'm going to post one of my stories here and see what people think. Hopefully y'all will ...

    Jul 23, 2009


Find wonder in the everyday, find everyday language to articulate it.
— Maurice Manning