RiverStar73519

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This is seriously one of the best things I have ever read on this site. This is CRAZY good. Your tone is perfect, your words are perfect, everything is perfect. ...

Hey! I really like this, I can really relate to what you're trying to say. I love the stanzas that rhyme, I think it flows nicely. Even when the poem ...

Thank you so much for reviewing! I agree, I think I'm going to change it to running! Again, thank you so much.

Pleasepleaseplease give me your opinions! It would be much appreciated!

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Bump!:)

Hey! First, to start off, it's a cute story. I've read some previous chapters and they were fun. So, yeah! "He was balding, and was chubby." Here you could just ...

anyone else care to review??:)

Hey. Thanks for the review!:) I like this a lot! It has a nice flow and it's adorable. Maybe try to be a little more descriptive with the scene to ...

Can y'all review please?:)

Hey, crazy inspiration came on this one. I was watching a commercial for Michigan and traveling there, and it showed a picture of this couple, just sitting on this rock, ...

Haha, sorry, I really don't know how to quote stuff... :P

Hey! Thanks for the review. This is a really cool idea. Expect the unexpected is the motto of my existence. I don't know if you need to put "Expect the ...