RiverStar73519

Hahah, thanks so much! I'll see what I can do!:)

Thanks for the reviews everyone!♥

Hi! First off, thanks for reviewing:) This is a new direction in songwriting for me. It's much more abstract and less perfectly rhymed than the work I normally do, but ...

I love it. The dejected, underlying feeling of sadness and hopelessness is subtle yet so obvious. I'm very new to the world of poetry, but I can say I agree ...

Since you reviewed one of my poems, I'm going to review one of yours! Since yours was so in-depth, I'm going to make this concise. There's not much to review, ...

Thanks for the reviews everyone! Seriously, it means a lot that the majority of you all liked it, and even if you didn't, you took the time to read it! ...

The stale hands of winter are cold around my heart. Your blizzard is engulfing me, in this twisted art. With every drop of snow, the flowers melt away, Dying from ...

It's a cute poem. Your writing is nice, and I think it kind of goes over what needs to be said without being too wordy which would be obnoxious for ...

I like it, a lot. I love the ending! Powerful and moving. I'm thinking that the transition between talking about the flower and yourself is a little weak. Maybe go ...

I have to admit, I had no idea it was about sex either. Maybe you could insert words that kind of bring that forth more. The "Why can't he play?" ...

Thanks so much to both of you all! That means SO much to me!

Your rushing waters they run deep. Your jumbled secrets they strive to keep. Laying gnarled on the rocky shore, Lost with the forlorn cries of your half open door. Your ...

Thanks! Love the "They've" suggestion. It sounds much better that way. I played with that line a lot to get it to fit so now I really like it! Thanks!

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