River

A subject dealt with by all people at one point, it was well written and origional for what it was.Although I kind of felt that you wern't sure how you ...

Really great and discriptive. I am a Christian and I love the way that you expressed Jesus's emotions. Alot of people sometimes forget that he had them, I think.

A bit strange. No offense. I felt it was a bit rushed and perhaps more characters could have been put in. Also I am A bit confused after reading it. ...

This poem is awsome! If only it were longer :( It remindes me of what Shakesphere said about the world being a stage and all of that. This is really, ...

It paints a nice picture for sure, I felt it could've been more personal, more emotional. But it isn't bad at all!

This is good. Ive felt the same way before and I know what you're trying to say.

My eyes open then close I toss and turn trying to escape Then all at one its over I am away from the world Then I enter my world of ...