River

I utterly disagree. America had a black president before a female one because the black man in question was more charismatic, a better orator, and had better policies than the ...

I would like to remind you that not all of us are Americans here. Well considering that Canada, Australia and the UK have already had female presidents or prime ministers ...

I should start off by saying that I am a die hard Republican and it is my dearest hope that SC govoner Nikki Haley will become the first female president. ...

I was raised in a strict observant Baptist home but plan to convert to Catholisism later on in life. Catholics worship Mary and revere her because they beleive her to ...

Incredible! Mysterious and blunt in a good way. I think the story could have been told better from a first person view, but some people don't write as well in ...

Alright, your story is good, very good. I liked the feel of it but at times i felt the speech was a bit robotic and you seemed to be listing ...

I don't understand exactly how this is a poem and It sounds like a story that I haven't heard. I might be a nice story though.

I liked how you potrayed Rivers. That character made the story worth reading to me. My only critisims are that the story seemed a bit rushed. Just my opinion.

Her words. His fists. Make them cry like little birds. And wrap white tape around their wrists. Fall, fall, watch him fall. Thump, thump, she's thrown to the floor. Words, ...

A perfect perception of the horrors or rape. I have met many people who have been violated and they go through so much. I like the reference to Charles Dicken's ...

A dark poem, wonderfully written. The symbolism is perfect as far as I am concerned. It reminds me of the book "The Thirteenth Tale" by Diane Setterfield.

Passionate and...your love and devotion for your sister is something I wish everyone was capable of. The poem was flawless. Congratulations.

I like the meaning and all but I felt it wasn't very...poetic. You had a good idea but I didn't feel like the best writing went into it.

A good depiction of a solider's last moments. I hate to watch war movies where sombody is shot and it dosen't seem to matter, the memory your solider gives is ...

Well if they're from the South like me, use words like ya'll and aint. Every other teenager also uses crap, freakin, and dang. Im not sure if those are curse ...