Ritaki

This is absolutely brilliant. The way you use your imagery (I LOVE THIS! So Éleïl shed his fingernails, crushed them and scattered them across the void. As the particles flew, ...

I suppose this is more of a clearly structured rant than a poem, which, in my opinion, is a good thing. It's quite straightforward and easy to relate to. There's ...

I absolutely love this! The eyes are quite piercing in contrast to everything else. To me, it's that inkling of life you'd never expect to see in a doll's eyes. ...

I was just a tinsy bit creeped out when I first started reading this..but continued anyways and it was worth it! I had a good laugh :P Very clever!

I must say this is the most intriguing poem I have yet to read on here. I'd like to disagree with one of the comments about their critique of "Never ...

For some reason when I read this poem I was reminded a little of Shel Silverstein...perhaps because of its magical quality. Very enjoyable read!

First of all, I'd like to say I know where you're coming from and I find this very amiable. Though, it was a bit bumpy at times in terms of ...

Written when I was around 14 years old. She sits with an idle brain, That comforts her in troubled times, And tells her to smile happily, Such a harmless little ...

Quite original & deviously humorous! My crush eats my homework every single day....

This is incredibly sweet with much wisdom subtly woven into its lines. I would like, however, to draw attention to the fact that despite any errors pointed out by the ...