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Re: Alternate reality. Part 1. (18+)
I enjoyed this story. Undoubtedly, it definitely has potential. The detail you have is amazing, specifically the way you describe the thoughts of your character and the scenary. All of ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Fleirzon: People of the Skies )4-5
Hey! First off, I wanted to say that I enjoyed this story. The wording you used didn't make it hard for the reader to picture in his/her head. Overall, this ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: The Tears of Pain and Blood
I thought this was a very captivating poem. The short style of it draws the reader in almost instantly, and the way it's present makes almost anyone relate to this ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Second chapter to my werewolf story! (Sorry, it's untitled)
Wow, what an interesting story! I just wanted to say that I was drawn in straight from the start of this piece. I think you have great detail with the ...
Mar 27, 2010 -
Re: The Swordmaster's Path
Hey there! First off, I wanted to comment on the easy "flow" of your story. I'm a big fan of fantasy, and think you did a great job making the ...
Mar 23, 2010