Riot_starter

This was...amazing. There's no grammer mistakes, and the flow was beautiful. Did this realy happen to you? Your decription was very real and very sorrowful, but not in that depresed ...

Your heart is hallow , And I fallow where you go . I would know if you love me , Nothing in the world would let me know . Nothing ...

Your story is the most incredible thing I've read in forever! I can't believe you stopped! I got all misty eyed, feeling totally sympathetic for Sarah, like the weirdo I ...

(Prolouge) “Give it back!” Muse screamed stubbornly. “Not unless I get a kiss in return!” Flame smirked, holding Muse's arrow high above his head. Being a year older had it's ...

Alice could only describe it as someone watching her from afar, like a guardian angel or some other deity .(I LOVE this first sentance.) Taking a look around the grand ...

A single tear, for a single lover, rolls down her pretty face. It's been a year, but he said forever, yet forever has come in vain. A broken organ, that ...

I really enjoyed this. I like how you kept it simple but yet it made me really think about it after I read it. All in all-simply amazing. Your begining ...