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Re: Maelstrom
This was haunting. And gorgeous. It was the type of poem that when you're done reading it, it sits there in your mind and you replay what you just read ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Catch a Falling Star
I liked how it was so deep. There really are a lot of emotions hidden behind your words. The only thing I would have a problem with is your rhyme ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Save The World Chapter Three
I woke up with an entire body ache. Every muscle, every tendon, was on fire. My eyes shot open, but it was like they were still closed. Darkness greeted me. ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Black Kisses
This was a twisted way to look at love. I really liked it. It wasn't just your average run of the mill, sappy, "Oh, I love you." love poems. It ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Save the World Chapter Two
We payed someone off the streets to go get us food, in fear of being caught or recognized. We were all Wanted. Being Hunted down relentlessly was tiring work. The ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Save the World
Prologue Our world, as we know it, is ending. Our families have been imprisoned, our houses are under watch 24/7. We've been reduced to rags, hiding in starvation, living where ...
Aug 11, 2010 -
Re: Flameshore, Chapter Four
Flame was battered and bruised, cut and scraped, but he was still there, alive. He was still breathing. She rushed over to his side, and gently sat down on the ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: The Twisted Lies of a Girl In Love. Part 1
I absolutely loved it! Please please please post more! I'm addicted already. Everything was beautiful, except for the fact that he was/is hitting her. Big no no, and if I ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: That Woodland Elf
Cloaked by wisdom; nature's best threat. If shown all, you've seen nothing yet. She'll treat you like a cutie pet, That woodland elf. Through character charm and bodily grace, doubted ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: If I
Ross- Thank you[:..You were quite right. It was more of an Alternative/Indie piece for me, I can't stand mainstream music. Well, just rap. But anyways, I was thinking more along ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: If I
Suicide and Compromise, everything I refuse to hide, is showing...on your beautiful face. Lovers lost, the new holocaust. Something tells me I can't go on; without you. Gliding on this ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Flameshore, Chapter Three
She dreamed that she was in the meadow with Flame again, running from her kidnappers. She saw herself fall from her horse, but it was like she was another person. ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: Flameshore, Chapter Two
Muse was aware of two things. First, she was bound and gagged. She felt the stiff rope rubbing on her wrists and ankles. Second, she was moving. Swiftly, she could ...
Mar 31, 2010 -
Re: Poem for school
Definately amazing. I love that book...Please don't ask why I read it, my teacher suggested it..haha. This was very original...and I loved your ryhme scheme. I think you deserve and ...
Mar 31, 2010 -
Re: Love Bites!
As you broke my heart it fell to the floor . It crawled and wanted more , But you cant give a frown to let someone down . We used ...
Mar 31, 2010
