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Re: Hallelujah
I should start off by saying that I'm not much of a poet, certainly not a 'haiku master', but I know some basics behind the art. I also hope it's ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: Modern Times (Pre-read)
Hello Way2Dawn, I'm not sue exactly what you have in mind here, but I can tell you do have an idea you've been kicking around. You're also in luck, I ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: My Beloved
A fun subject that I am sure is not foreign to too many. What I am not so confident of, is if this piece would fit best, as is, categorized ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Paranormality
You must already be raring to get started with writing, seeing as this is your first post. First, let me extend a warm welcome to on on behalf of YWS. ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: Heroes
This is certainly a well thought out piece. You've captured a certain senselessness in the hardly explained, yet ironically justified, violence and loss of life. Two children are thrust into ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: A Journey - Part 1: Memory ~~(Chapter 1)~~
I have to say, this is a wonderful start to a story. From the imagery of the outside light fighting the dimly lit room, to the contrasts between the pale ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: The tree Ballet
Well I'll start with saying this is my first review; I hope I have some useful insight for you. I can definately grasp the foundation of various imagery used to ...
Jan 23, 2011
