RileyStone

Your writing style is very pretty. One thing that I did notice is you sentences tend to be...lengthy. There's a lot of description and adjectives. Sometimes it just seems like ...

Honestly, I had a little trouble following, it just wasn't holding my attention. It's all just very ... blah I guess. Nothing really happened. And as stated above, I feel ...

Hey girl! I'm Riley. I'm also kinda new to YWP, had a friend introduce me recently. Glad to see another vampire/werewolf/zombie fan. That stuff is right up my alley, I'll ...

Hey man, I'm Riley. Also a total Harry Potter fanatic (and Tom Felton fangirl!). I think we would get along, my sense of humor is..."special". Or so I've been told. ...

Hey Dance, Dang! 7 times?! Cool to have you back though. Anywho, I'm Riley. Nice to meet cha. I'm kinda new here, could use a friend. ;) What do you ...

Overall, loved it. The only error I caught was If I beg you not to leave will you stay with me and believe,

The Vampire King - Prologue He stood tall, broad shoulders squared and chin lifted definitely. A shadow of a smile played at his lips, twisting his proud expression while scarlet ...