RileyJ

I’m frozen no motor function my lips and tongue move but the words reach only isolation I have only patience restless and undying There can be no crying no tears ...

I'll wear my bandana and raise my black flag and remind them of civilians carried away in black bags. Nobody listens I'm a waste of their time I wonder if ...

A really enjoyable read. As EvensLily said, you did an excellent job of conveying the message. There are just a couple times in the poem where I feel like the ...

This is really excellent. One thing I find a lot of authors have difficulty with is knowing when to use allusions and what allusions to use. Often times they don't ...

I actually really enjoyed this piece. I think you did a marvelous job with taking something trivial and writing about it so elegantly. What's really interesting is how you manage ...

"'a cardinal sin' the snake man weeps as the little boy begs for sleep and i know of no 'bounty' left protected in thought of theft but rather left open ...

string me up with the guitar that strummed my heart just like those other bands string me up with the thoughts with the voynich words we couldn't understand. Real life ...

Wow, I am absolutely stunned at how many things I love about this and they're all in such a short space! First and foremost, I am a huge huge fan ...

I had such a hard time trying to review this poem, only because I had such a difficult time reading it. Let me explain, I don't mean that it's awful, ...

I read the first stanza of this poem and immediately assumed I was going to hate it. I assumed that it was just going to be a cliche of the ...

This piece is very interesting, a step or two away from being thuroughly enjoyable. The language is almost cryptic but sensible, and the meaning is deep and appliable. But I ...

The wind blows always though it might not seem it the wind is always there however soft it may be Not that night. that night the world was still and ...

I am, amongst many things, a poet. I write poetry for love for loss for laughter for fun and for... whatever. Well this time is different. This time This time ...