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Re: With a Dying Breath (PG-13) (edited)
Love how the poem was told by the one who dies, it was kind of a very cool perspective. It seems like you put a lot of thought in the ...
Oct 31, 2009 -
Re: No title
I really liked the beginning of this poem, it was very capturing. I could feel the intensity of the situation depicted and I really liked it. Aside from the grammatical ...
Oct 31, 2009 -
Re: Pain Forever Gone
As I read the poem it seemed very clear to me that it was written with a lot of feeling. I like the way it gave hope at the end; ...
Oct 31, 2009