Riedawriter23

I really enjoyed this. I toiled late into the night, With needle and golden thread I worked, trying to sew Your heart together again. **The first time I read this ...

I don't believe there's a right or wrong either. It's just an idea. Because, in truth, nothing is right for everyone, and nothing is wrong for everyone.

I personally think that if they all think that it's right and it's working for them, then it's obviously right in their case. In other cases if it doesn't work ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! :) Okay, now with the critique. I think that this is quite cliche. Someone being alone, as you said so yourself "Of course everyone know how ...

I agree with borgishsmorg, I really liked your whole idea but I couldn't get any feeling from this because you didn't really explain why or what you can't do. Try ...

To be honest, I couldn't really get myself to finish this. It wasn't that your intentions weren't was just the way that you gave it out like that. The questions ...

This is more like dialogue then poetry. I think that this is your motive (a cliche motive at that) but that you haven't put it into poem form yet. You ...

This faucet is on the fritz. Drip, Drip, Drip, Every morning another drip. The beads of water gather at the tip, gaining weight with every sip. **I really like this ...

I agree, this did seem unfinished. I felt like there was so much more to come. Aside from that though, I really do love your voice! I felt like I ...

Your imagery is really beautiful. I felt like I was looking at the scene. Then a tear extinguished it, and the steam tapped the glass politely, whispering, “Do not escape ...

Hello! :) We killed the town together. One by one they went down and the eulogy for each was short and sweet. Something none of them had ever experienced before. ...

So...yeah I wrote the paper...and she gave me a C! I couldn't believe it! But it's okay because that was only the first draft and my second draft got an ...

I really liked this. At first I think that the format sort of took away from the beauty of the poem but then I just sort of forgot about the ...

...yeah I wanted to put that in my essay but my teacher wouldn't let me. Mostly because I don't think that it's a choice she would make. I'm only supposed ...

Is being homosexual a disorder that can be "fixed"? Or are people just born attracted to the same sex? This poll is for a report I'm writing on the subject. ...