Riedawriter23

I really like this. Really great discriptions and analogies. I esspecially liked when you were discribing beauty to be more than skin deep.

Thank you! Great critique and thanks also for the website. :)

I already wrote the book by the way you guys. I just wanted critique on this blurb before I sent in my enquiry. This book is Fantasy Fiction also so ...

Taneantra Letrans is 14-years-old and soon to be Queen of Remany, in any case, her whole life had been planned out since the beginning of time. Well, all of this ...

This was awesome! I felt like I was there quite literally. I'm beggining to think you're a professional Incan. lol. Great job on detail and character developement.

This was a funny little poem, It made me laugh and that makes it good!

This was well written. I didn't like the second person point of view so much at first and thougt that you'd lose it, but in the end you pulled it ...

The loop was wound tightly against her throat as the chanting abolished her hearing. Witch, witch! She gulped and let her legs tremble until almost resulting in a self-inflicted death. ...

This was good. I like the discription at the beggining, it was very interesting as well as the fight and also the information and clues that you keep giving about ...

This was brilliant! Personally as a writer, I've learned( from professional advice) that spelling errors aren't as important as getting your story, setting, characters, etc. in order which is what ...

This was great. There's suspence around every corner and I have to keep reading to have almost every important question I have answered. You're really talented at leading your readers ...

I really liked this one as well. I was glad the characters actually met each other and I love the sense of humour that Jon took on in the beggining. ...

I enjoyed this just as well as the first actually. Well done. You introduced your characters very well.

Wow that was great! I felt like I was reading a real novel and you did absolutely excellent. I can't wait to read more. A poet in author's clothes? I ...

She jumped for her life down the black endless tunnel and let it swallow her for the most of ten minutes. If they were behind her, maybe, just maybe they ...