Riedawriter23

I really like the big words you used but on the other hand they sort of ended in the destruction of the poem. I'm not sure if this is about ...

I liked this. Some how it seems like it could use a bit more though. Some lines were longer where they should have been shorter and you turned the rhyming ...

I actually have many. Most are just men I wouldn't enjoy being as close with, others I wish were more. I've got Jack, he can read my mind and I ...

lol, you know who would be really funny? Brad and Fand, everyone thinks of it already I think but omg. imagine them editing poetry together. I think I'd die. lol!

I didn't like how you continued the survivor parts. I didn't really get what was really happening until the end of the poem and that was only because I read ...

Wow. great detail. I loved every bit of it. I however liked how you gave your characters no names and how it was like we were in the mind of ...

This was great. It had the passion of a strong poem, aka, your others. It had the history of a thinking poem with mystery as well, and it had a ...

Whoa. Okay from the title I really wasn't expecting this, and since this is only the second poem I've read of yours I was REALLY shocked...but then again, after I've ...

WOW, was this little girl getting raped by her brother? I may be extremely wrong or I could be right I have no shame about it. Well I love it ...

If I HAD a room that I visited more than once a year...no, it would always be a mess. I mean come on, I'm a princess, warrior, wilin, and now ...

I... wouldn't call it eavesdropping really. I can see Jacks thoughts and we can talk to each other through them. Sometimes I might take a peek at what he's thinking ...

Thank you. I'm really liking this feedback.

I'd say staying sane is most important. I'm most likely to be ignored or maybe even the very opposite if I were to go insane....again. -Taneantra Are you afraid of ...

Oh and by the way Sureal, I DID scrap the whole blurb and I started over with a new onw. I like it better and it fit more with my ...

These questions just keep getting easier and easier. I'm like a magnet to betrayal. Everyone I love just... chooses another side...even the ones who once loved me in return. I ...