Riedawriter23

I liked the way the words were presented and the way you left some lines short, though some lines could be longer to give the poem more body. This was ...

This was wonderful. There wasn't a moment it was off flow and the analogies were perfect. I also loved the scence you showed throughout. Really nice!! Keep at it! -Rieda

These are really nice. I think you'll do great with the book. Each of these pictures made me look long and hard they were really interesting and caught my attention. ...

I really liked this poem. I found complete truth in it and I liked how you compared darkness to a woman to a poets lonely companion that was very smart. ...

lol, of course I don't mind fshr, you didn't have to ask. I was actually hoping to see the master at work, esspecially in this era, I've been waiting for ...

"Well this is certainly something." Jon said blankly after seeing the small dorm him and Liza would be sharing. It consisted of a small privy with a washtub, a couple ...

I understand all of this because Americas government is the worst to me even though I don't often say it. I just don't know where the music is. lol. I ...

I became a little confused. I thought it was just going to be about hands from your title, (which might I add, I rather liked) but I expected more detail ...

This was very enjoyable to read. The whole time I was thinking and never knowing and by the end I wanted to know more. You have a very great description ...

Okay I was a bit surprised by this. I was esspecially surprised about how you started you kept the word fuck going through the whole thing. Strangely I liked it ...

Okay I like the top half. I was actually really into the top half. But as soon as I got to the bottom your words sort of became slurred and ...

This was brilliantly done Clau!!! You did have a few spelling errors here and there mostly in Chapter three, but otherwise...Bravo! Great job with this. It was a different and ...

This was really nice. You did a tell thing which I usually don't like but it really turned out to help the poem. I could see the things you were ...

Well, let me pick and choose my answer. I've had many times in the last month...mostly because I'm no good at wrestling. It was when Kelin had led me into ...

YAY BRAD!!!! Great work and quick too. That would have taken me forever if I could do it all. Way to go!!!