Riedawriter23

Ooo this WAS da bomb Brad! Aside form the errors (which everyone else corrected) this was a perfect sequel. I too recognized the Rodriguez thing. I can't wait to see ...

Yes, really better without the charcoal spheres part. I really liked this poem. It needs a little more description though. If you could add in a few more adjectives to ...

Myth- Switch #1 is a working progress right now. I've actually written a lot more to it but it was just really stuff off of the top of my mind ...

This was great! Now we're back to the serious medical stuff and back to Jon. Wonderful! I loved all the medical problems that were going on that was nice, now ...

Ooo this was very complementary to your last one! I think I'm definately gonna follow this along. I loved your stereo-types, the way you made this sound like an actual ...

This was really nice. Nice analogies within the lines and descriptive words. I liked each line and found they had there own meaning separately. Good job! Keep it up! -Rieda

Ah I love it! I knew it was going to be something exciting I just knew it. Everyone of these things is something different and this new perspective that you ...

I liked both. They were each very simple and affective. There wasn't too much or too little and you got the point across in very flowly descriptive yet simple and ...

Very interesting. I liked the dialog you put in. It could use some spelling edits but otherwise I found this very affective. Good job. Keep at it! -Rieda

Hehe, I'm bored and therefore going to make learning about me fun (if it can be, which it most likely can't...) So...just ask a question and I'll answer it. I'll ...

lol, I guess that since I get it now that's pretty clever! -Rieda

I sort of liked this. Your metaphors were great I just feel like more feeling is needed in this. Not really feeling but more description I guess I should say. ...

The structure was sort of bad, you were missing words in places, and you also (I hate this) used a lower case "I" for most of your words where it ...

This is very creative and I can tell you put much work into it. I'm a lover of everything magic so I could really relate to the words you used ...

I really liked this. I loved the two different personalities you had and how you kept the confusion going throught. Also very nice ending. The only thing I would suggest ...