Riedawriter23

I get about half of what you were trying to say. I think that there were mixed feelings while you were writing this? It sort of seems like you were ...

This was really nice. Besides the fact that the i's were lowercase and the whole thing sort of read like a paragraph. Maybe...some lines will work? I know this flows ...

Wow this was great Andy! I love your descriptions and the perspective you put this in was superb. Is this like a diary entry? I noticed a name at the ...

God! Ariel is such a badass! I really didn't expect her to be like this, but it was for the better. It makes Ch. even more interesting which I thought ...

Oh great now Jon is in trouble? Great! More suspence and I'm guessing the answering of questions is...far off? Again I say that I hope it is. Ch. is way ...

234 pie squared on average. '_~ hehe! Funny one. lol

Hunger, hunger. The feeling dominated all other senses. It beckoned for attention and wrangled every loophole that could deny its passion. The slits that made as eyes for the large ...

Ooo self portrait? I may have already said this but Brad you're a hot stud! 8) lol. These are really, really good. I didn't know that you could draw which ...

I rather liked this. I caught the mood and the meaning even though I caught the mood more so. *He is the rent of reason, a soggy sacrament, his shadow ...

Yes I like the edit better. Everything is now perfecto! I really liked how it had such a story like meaning, yet a poets voice. That's often hard to do ...

This was really nice. It flowed beautifully and the lines were well plotted out. I also like the meanings of your poems. And I too reread your poems over and ...

Amazing. Ch. never stops surprising me. Everything was in touch with the others. Giving suspence and leaving things hanging keeping (ME) everyone interested and reading intently. And Sarah's not in ...

Sleek and supple imperfection The desired blotched reflection. Hallucinating tandem thoughts Reverie becomes sick plots Taste turns to a tangent plea Imprudence preening impunity Eloquence a suede acc

Was...not....expecting...that! Whoa I mean I thought Ariel was a good girl but um...she's kinky. A threesome? That was hott! I mean Kyle, Jon, AND Ariel, just amazing Brad you certainly ...

AHHH! I don't even know what to think right now! You've truley shocked me Brad! I mean Ariel? That's one turn you just put on this. This'll create even more.... ...