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Re: YWS Quote Script
(I hope that fits. lol. And that was a good one you picked!) I feel about airplanes the way I feel about diets. It seems to me they are wonderful ...
Mar 28, 2007 -
Re: YWS Quote Script
I'm just trying something out here so...yeah. Okay, so this is almost like a script with only quotes. I'll write down one quote from a famous author/poet/director/movie and you answer ...
Mar 28, 2007 -
Re: You owe me
I woke up and ran to your room to enter blank desire. My heart renched out to call your name I felt as though on fire. You left me with ...
Mar 28, 2007 -
Re: Not forgiven
This is a little different, but it makes sense I swear! ----------------------------------- He's stuck inside his misery. He's washed through pains on windowsills. "I've come to take they hurt away!" ...
Mar 28, 2007 -
Re: Prosthesis #6 /P
XD this is one crazy man you've created Brad! But of course interesting and I love it. What I loved the most was that, as you were going into the ...
Mar 27, 2007 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 3
I just love this story! Everything is so different and unexpected. I hope Tea didn't die! The brother/sister love thing was really cool it would be sad if it ended ...
Mar 27, 2007 -
Re: Come Out
This was an overall good intention but...the ending made it sort of tacky. Ofour has already mentioned your spelling so I won't. There's actually a spellcheck before you post so ...
Mar 27, 2007 -
Re: Black Water
I love this poem. It means so much and in so little words. It has a "deep" feeling to it, as I already told you. I also love your word ...
Mar 27, 2007 -
Re: Chionophobia #0.01
XD Clau you crazy woman! ..... What were you thinking?! ..... It was kinda hot actually. Kyle, pregnant? Woo! And you made Jon sound so wonderful and unsupportive in a ...
Mar 27, 2007 -
Re: Prosthesis #5 /P
Awww, this was so cute. I LOVE the Kyle/Jon thing and this was also made me extremely hungry but I'll get over it. lol They are just the cutest friends ...
Mar 27, 2007 -
Re: Prosthesis #4 /P
Ah this was scary! I didn't expect it to be scary but it was! Poor Jon, he's not going to die is he?! You did wonderful on description! I loved ...
Mar 25, 2007 -
Re: Prosthesis #3 /P
Kyle and Ariel?! Omg that REALLY caught me off guard. Somehow I think that I shouldn't be reading this until I finish Ch. but of course I'll read it anyways ...
Mar 25, 2007 -
Re: The Diary of Autumn Day Blake
Hehe, this was hilarious! I love her perspective and... just her life is interesting. This wasn't much and even in the little that I read I was laughing and interested ...
Mar 25, 2007 -
Re: Tamia's quest IV
Ah, wonderful ending! And I love how this felt like action but was really after the action. I don't have much to really critique except maybe check for capitals after ...
Mar 24, 2007 -
Re: To Keep No Secrets (Chapter Six added)
Ah, narrators POV this time, interesting it didn't affect the story in any way it was actually nice to finally just look at what was going on :) . And ...
Mar 24, 2007
