Riedawriter23

Hello! :) I think that this was a good idea. The titles was really good and the concept was really nice but you didn't put into it your full potential. ...

Hello. :) One thing I noticed was no punctuation. Though I only noticed it after reading the entire poem and looking back at it. I think you can easily add ...

XD I love it. It's so bad that it's...almost really good! 0.0 If that makes sense. Maybe that was the point? :P That's rad. I did it for all the ...

XD adorable, Arris. *claps* Wonderful artist! :)

Hello! :) That first night, I took a risk. I went to that place, warily, seeking, not knowing what I'd find. **This starts off confusing because I have no view ...

Hello! :) Firstly, I don't consider this poetry, especially dramatic poetry. If anything this belongs in the Romantic Fiction section so I'll ask a poetry mod about moving this. You ...

Hello! :) What really got to me in this poem was how you put out your lines. I couldn't concentrate on the content of your poem because I was having ...

Hello! :) Welcome to YWS! Okay, the first thing that I noticed was the way you structured your lines. It made it sort of difficult to read. It can do ...

Hello! :) I really enjoyed this. It was short and beautiful, you said a lot in just a few words. Oh attractive shadow, how your cool blue hues tempt me. ...

All of you are so gorgeous!!! I'm jealous! 0.0

Haha, when I said by my dad I meant dad actually wrote this. After he thought of it, he was really excited for me to put it up and see ...

By my dad: Racism is a difficult topic. You say something wrong And you may get dropped quick. Quick as in fast, falling to the ground, and hitting the pavement ...

Don't be scared. I started looking for literary agents when I was 13 years old and didn't actually get one until I was 14. I didn't tell any of them ...

The drapes were a silk cocoon of sloppy hurriedness to reconnect leg to torso. Spider webs of scarlet formed stained glass squares in the creases of his pale lips. So ...

Hello! :) I do think that this has potential. What I think you need to work on however is your punctuation. And also, realize that poems about the Titanic have ...