Riedawriter23

Okay I lied, this may be the best Prosthesis ever (it's almost beating the kiss, and that's only because I like Kyle and Jon kissing!) You had me for a ...

Hm, this was really nice. I actually liked the longness to it. I hope to actually hear it at some point though because I couldn't find the music it would ...

Wonderful lyrics. I too love the theme, it's very new and different. I can actually imagine singing this...I did matter-o-fact. Probably not in the tune you intended, but it came ...

Woo! *claps hands* Simply brilliant Snoink. XD...I hope you're okay. :) ~Rieda

...I didn't see any rhyme. This was a nice poem, got the point across and good word usage. The two stanzas just seem a little un-proportioned to me. I didn't ...

OMG vampire horses! *just got it* That's hott. :)

Are those tatoos on their butts... *thinks* nevermind. XD. I'll leave that alone. Tis beautiful. *cackles as well*

7/10 Very deep. hehe

6/10 just because tigger is freaking wonderful. :) *hugs tigger*

Ooo this was nice Brad. This was nice and calm and yet so informative! The camere gently turned towards the equator. *Just change that to camera. Tis all I found ...

That was a surprising ending. Ch. is still at it?! Omg does that mean that Ariel is still a "bad" person? hehe, I'm still trying to figure out how Kyle ...

Hmm this is very interesting, I like it. There's only one stanza with rhyme though so that sort of threw me off. And I believe grey can be spelled both ...

This was very interesting. :) Claudette pointed out the main things that I noticed. I really didn't get the 3/4 parts, maybe you just put that instead of a comma? ...

No, the italics weren't intended at all. I haven't had time to actually edit this I think it was like the first thing I ever posted. Thanks for your reviews ...

This...was....the...best....Pro....EVER! You made a Kyle/Jon kiss last like forever. I totally love you. Even though tis not Kyle... it's not Kyle right? That would be upsetting Lol. Kyle would love ...