Riedawriter23

This was a really beautiful story. I must say that I didn't expect the girl to die in the end, that was a very nice touch, it only made the ...

It had a very nice and comforting concept but the flow is sort of off for me. The lines aren't all matched up and yet they have the same rhyming ...

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Hm, Scribe and Fand.(...they're in my closet) Clau and Brad. (Too cute) Crysi and everyone. (Hopper) ;) Dono and Kat. (kaduh) ...that all I have for now I guess. I ...

Ah, you all make me so jealous! I didn't know there were so many gorgeous writers out there! Clau- Hot pic! Love the hair. *hides face* Just wait until I ...

Aww, this was really beautiful and sad. I loved your analogies throughout the whole thing. It all sort have felt like a poem, it flowed very nicely. This was when ...

Poison me with endless promises. Tell me I’m worth nothing. Shun my every hope so you can, Feed my lust with something. Tell me now that who I am Is ...

Poor Kyle! Like seriously, Dr.Haaser should die. I only like, half way believe that what Dr.Haaser put in Kyle's stomach was a monitering device, I mean I know they need ...

Awww, poor Tea. It's sad that she doesn't know that Eolen actually loves her. I can only imagine what she felt like just having him watch as she was struck ...

Ooo, this made me shiver all over Jig. But it was great in it's unique creepy way. Lol, I loved the whole concept. I didn't really think that the old ...

Aha! I knew Ariel was evil. She can't be completely good, it just seems so impossible. But she hurt Jon! I don't know how much more hurt Jon can take. ...

I’m a burden. I was the catalyst that raised the flames. Made your life hell and even wished it upon you. Held teary eyes to your face of emotionless. Wished ...

Hello my angel. Thou that shall save me from deluding my seams, Tarnishing the skin that protects my innocence, So fragile and alone, cruelly empty to the touch Sensitive, unearthly, ...

I liked the addition. Jared being beat up kinda made me smile...though my nose hurts now *shudders* I can imagine the blood gushing. Great job Vernon, can't wait for more. ...

This was very good! I didn't catch the cliche that you were talking about. From the beginning I thought that it was going to be a love story between Wyes ...