Riedawriter23

Awww. This was a really great projection. I actually have some what of an idea of how hard fatherhood might be. I can't believe he was shot at the end ...

Lots of biting! Yes Clau, twas creepy and disturbing but in a very Clau way. What did you mean by "Hope I don't scare anyone too badly, or give them ...

This one was really good! Eolen came back for her! I didn't expect such a rescue which makes me even happier that it happened. :) That beast scared me. Lol, ...

Wow, okay that was a little unexpected. Ripped his stomach out? Ew! (is secretly excited about Haaser's dismemberment. Jasmine is TORN up! Who is this other woman though? Her behavior ...

Hehe, when you put it that way....*scowls* is this sarcasm?

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Okay, the first thing I notice is your paragraph structure. It sort of reminds me of how a poem would be set up and so confuses me in the beginning. ...

XD, I was wondering what you were getting at for a second. All this toilet talk and I thought to myself...This has to mean something, it has to have a ...

Ahem. ?????? What's up with all the matches peeps? XD

OMG, Yeah, when you said there was going to be a shock I didn't think it'd be that kind of shock. I actually told you that Quinn was hot at ...

This was great! I was about to pass out, I thought that Jon was really dead for a second Lol. I hope he kills Ariel. That stupid broad. How could ...

XD, this one was really funny. I think I like Quinn in his drunk state. It sort of scared me at the end though, I'd thought he'd been taken. Lol, ...

No more dreaming for you. :mean:

Kyle and Ariel? *gasp* This is getting so good. Personally I think Pros. is amazing. Disturbing is like the Earth's misplaced halo. Everyone's drawn to it whether they'll admit it ...

You're really quick. Tis becoming wonderful Brad. I love your first person writing. Very different from Pros. and Ch. and yet so appealing. Great Job! ~Rieda