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I liked it. The rhyming was great, and of course I can't help but to encourage: Smacking lips, cracking hips **That's my favorite part, of course. It gives the poem ...

Lol, this was really good. I liked how he said that even if he was gay she would make him straight again. It was a very nice introduction of the ...

I rolled my eyes and slammed myself into the back seat. Do makeup___ was he joking? He had to be joking. I looked under my arm seeing that I didn’t ...

Wow, he died like really good! Really realistic, Vernon. I was holding my own throat just reading it. Thank God he died. I agree... and or speak for everyone when ...

I really enjoyed this one. Everything is coming together really well. And awwww, Wyes is crying, he's such a baby lol jk. I'm glad we're starting to learn more about ...

I tried to move but my body stayed still and shook violently. What had just happened there? What was that thing? The gunshot rang in my ears and I could ...

Adara's motives: 1. Stay alive 2. TRY to be a little bit brave so that others stop worrying 3. Feel safe to use the self defence skills that she has ...

Wow! I like it a lot! I didn't expect Jared to come home. I did at first but then I was like, no, they're going to escape this time. Big ...

Wow this is really good, Dono. From the beginning to the end I'm totally interested. You've made a great character out and the background was done very well. I already ...

oh....my....This one made me cry Brad. At first I was crying when Kyle and Jon kissed and then again when they were talking to each other and now...well I don't ...

I'm really confused but it's a good confused!!! I'm guessing this is all the Opal in Jon's eye taking affect? ...if I'm wrong then I'm with Clau, Ariel is very ...

*gasp* she wouldn't...She's going to risk her life so that Jon can have Kyle? Awwwww, *hugs Sarah* Okay, after all of this, I do like Sarah, She's overall a nice ...

:( I can't believe Ariel was going to make Jon kill himself. Pull the trigger? She's freaking crazy, man, like seriously. But I do think that Jon can get through ...

Awww. Is this why Kyle is so Kyle? You'd said that the last flashback would tell why...now I actually understand. Maybe he's afraid to love someone, I mean he always ...

I disagree Clau. If it's Kyle/Jon intercourse then it's okay, lol jk. I would have never guessed that the presence would come in. I seriously thought that Sarah might be ...