Riedawriter23

Here is yet another excellent review. By: JFW1415 Subject: Action Adventure She's both very detailed in this and also creative in how she reviews. Notice how everything in the story ...

Lena's parents are so awesome! I loved how she slapped the kiity. I kept imagining that scene over and over. Besides them, I don't know what to say. There were ...

Luke is my hero. When he was with Simone I was like...oh come on, he's just going to go through that and do nothing. No he's Luke, he's going to ...

The orange juice totally reminded me of my family. That was funny, I like how close all of the characters are. Okay...now, for James and Luke. *sigh* They're so adorable ...

Hello, welcome to YWS! :) Just making sure that you know the rules. Try to keep your posts to two reviews to every one literary work you post. Thanks!

Hello and welcome to YWS! :) Just here to inform you of the rules. Please keep your posts to two reviews to every literary work you post here. Thanks!

Gah, your characters are just so awesome! I can't wait to see this actually played out I'm so watching every episode! My favorite part was when James and Luke were ...

Both Sunshine and Lena are awesome. My favorite part was when Lena was like are you eating lube? I couldn't stop laughing. She's a very interesting character, afraid to say ...

XD I really liked this. Your characters really shown through. I liked the tension of the characters throughout it but most of all...I loved Lena! :) She had some really ...

pepperoni or plain cheese pizza? what country do you live in? what's you ethnicity? **Plain cheese because I don't eat pork or beef! I live in the US of A ...

Hello, welcome to YWS! :) The first thing that I noticed was your title. Take out the apostrophe before the s. It should just be He loves her. HE LOVES ...

But...but, they're so cute! How could you!! *chomps on a bunny* :) Very pretty, dear.

Yeah I agree, I think the lips could have been drawn better. It needs a little more shading under his chin too. Good work though. :) ~Rieda

Hello! :) The layout of this story should really be spaced out, it's painful to the eyes this way. Edit that first or else people might just look past this ...

Hello! :) This was really good for a rhyming poem. I feel that it would do much better if it didn't rhyme though...you know? I focused too much on the ...