Riedawriter23

um, beautiful words but I don't think I understand any of them. It seems like it should be simple considering your title and your ending...but it isn't. Every where you ...

Thrown apart. A part of me. Split to pieces, I won't find. Hidden there where I can't seek. Changing there as I unwind. Oh my place. Where I belong. So ...

8/10 awesome. :)

The first one is really great. I like the stance and everything. It looks as if it would really move on a game. and Great quote. :) The second one ...

...whoa. Okay, I really wasn't expecting a full sex scene between Tea and Eolen, especially when Jared just got home...wow. Lol, great writing though. I can really see the love ...

I love her behavior in this. You're excellent at female prospectives. lol. I could really imagine that as a diary entry on a cell phone. Very well written. I WAS ...

8s …whoa, so Alex and Quinn…And then…That was a lot that happened! Jacob should fall and die. I’m shocked really. I hadn’t expected so much in so little time! That ...

Yes this was very sweet. I agree with Snoink though. That stanza should go. It does nothing for the poem but mess with the rhyme a bit. You're laying on ...

I liked the whole poem. It really flowed nicely for me. I've always loved the simple poems that have a lot of meaning. The only part that through me off ...

Altogether, it's alright. I don't really get the point of it all though. There were too many focuses and not enough detail on each I think. And the title didn't ...

Well. It's not like I haven't read something like this before. Note in poetry form but...So, I'm going to be completely honest and said I liked it. :) It was ...

The way the lines are set really works for me. It gives the poem a really serious tone and makes it simple yet meaningful so I'll say that it doesn't ...

I agree with Clau. Showing the events of the poem could do a lot for it. It was altogether interesting and actually "witnessing" the event would be really great. I ...

Good point to get across. The rhyming is a little off in some places but it doesn't really matter depending on how the song is actually sung. Good job on ...

I didn’t feel anything, but when I saw Mev’s shaking hands and the bandage in them covered in blood I tried to stay as calm as possible. “What did you ...