Riedawriter23

...dude. That's like being asked why I love to breathe(dramatic :)) I love the DFA because it's all about Dono, duh! *bites* ~Rieda

--- Updated as of 18 June 2007 at 5:02 pm --- “Tag, you’re it.” And the game begins. I whisper it to myself, though no one is around to hear. ...

Thank you all. To tell the truth I know that I overfill my poetry with all those unneeded parts. It's just that the picture is so vivid that I feel ...

Holy crap she was fast! Good beginning. I paused to catch my breath, Period here at the speed she was going, she was long gone by now. When I turned ...

First of all, this was so sweet. I got teary-eyed myself as I read it. Now the crit. :) I shook me head as a sudden thought appeared in my ...

For your first, first person piece this was really great, Clau. It had a lot of emotion involved and even if you hadn't told me I would have guessed that ...

I think the beginning was really awesome. I liked the double personality of Quinn it was very interesting and that part inside of me was yelling "Just kill him!" Of ...

A void of falling petals Spiraling down in a symphony Singing songs we cannot hear And crashing. Still in silence. Leaving bare the tearstained fingers Frostbitten in the soothing water ...

A rose without peddles. The sun without light. A moonbeam without shadow. A night within a night. ------------------------ my sister wrote this. She's 10 and she's entering a poetry contest ...

I think that altogether this poem is nice. When you read over it once it seems really beautiful and simple but I do think the the last line needs to ...

lol, I was perfectly fine with it. I like the action. :)

I really liked this. I think the whole way that it was described was beautiful and I was left with feeling at the end. It's just such an almost cliche ...

Whoa 8s. That was certainly...deep. Okay as far as language is concerned you did an awesome job. Nice use of italics. It was a little more than a bit suggestive ...

Wow, this was really deep, Linds. There was a lot of feeling coming from the poem so that it didn't need any kind of rhyme or anything. It's fine the ...

XD, they are so cute! And when you said it started off with sex, I didn't expect it to be that! Lol. But eh, it was different and fit well ...