Riedawriter23

I wish I can (could) turn around, So I can (could) look away and couldn't see the ground. There lay the scar of how hard I've hit,(the scar of how ...

I liked this poem. The only thing I saw wrong was the lack of punctuation. The whole entire poem was three sentences so it read a little awkward. Other than ...

I like the rhyme in this but the rhyme in the last stanza seems forced. Saw and All don't really rhyme that well and the last line was a bit ...

lol, most of the things I was going to say have already been pointed out so I'm just going to comment on this. I loved the repetition and even just ...

when you look right me. **Should be when you look right AT me. This poem is really cliche is all. The beginning lines have been used so often that even ...

This was a really beautiful poem. I could actually feel something from this even though it was quite simple. The overall meaning of it though kind of took over. Very ...

This is one of my favorites. The beginning was just so beautiful and I could really see it. I do think that this belongs in narrative poetry but not as ...

I liked the wording in this acutally. The only problem for me was that you have one period in each stanza and it made it a little awkward to read. ...

I really liked this! Very descriptive and great meaning and imagery. The only part that I didn't understand was when you said the grass turned a sickly green. It's just ...

I don't know, I think I got the wrong impression at first. Lol, at first it was a guardian angel, totally innocent and then it turned into an unrequited love. ...

I didn't understand all of the parts, mostly the end, but the beginning was very nice and descriptive. The only part that I REALLY didn't get was: the fields are ...

I like this poem. It's very straight forward. Though the way the lines are structured makes it read sort of awkward, like the last three lines for instance. The idea ...

I really like this poem. The description was really good and the ending was great. I have nothing to...critique actually. lol. It was awesome though. I liked the meaning of ...

I do like this. To me though it's a lot of telling, even for a freeverse. You CAN add imagery into freeverse which would have done wonders for this poem. ...

This poem was a lot of telling and not enough imagery. You did have good description but other than that it felt a little soapy. The fact that the narrator ...