Riedawriter23

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Okay, "in and ex hail storms of doubt." since no one seemed to get it. It resembles two things inhaling and exhaling and hail storms. so they are inhale and ...

Basically the breathing represents a relationship. It has a lot of fixing up to do so that I can make point clearer.

This poem was by Carisha Kelsey but has been deleted for possible publication purposes

Part 2: Hola :) This one seemed a lot more human but it got....eerie. Still love the narrator. He/she :P seemed far more vulnerable and it was kinda shocking at ...

Hi! :) My poetry received responses, usually rejections, with notes dashed across the page, or atop a line: "searing but unfocused," "radiant if schizophrenic," "apocalyptic without an apocalypse." Th

Finally I get around to this! Okay, so. I want more. I'll start off by saying that....why wait?! 0.0 ...next. Alex is crazy! I love him. And now...Summer, gah she's ...

Rick=Awesome! :) I have your back too and so does "greg". Love ya! ~Rieda

Does it hurt, When you’re Bleeding. Time’s always here In the warmth of my arms And you’re sitting there Freezing. Don’t leave me. Just hold on to my Breathing. Now ...

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Rieda, you're beautiful. ^_^ *bites* is that a nose piercing I spy? And I adore the mask, Alice. Mwahahahaha, Yes, I officially have a "cool" nose. :) *bites back* Doc: ...

Lol yes my uncle worked at the movie theaters and begged for that poster so that I could have it. *sigh* I must have the Harry Potter things. Must. It's ...

Meeeeeeeee. I was being silly and bored. And I has a pretty pink flower! Can you see the hugemungous Harry Potter poster in the back? Hehe. Oh yeah.

James and Luke are so awesome! Their lines and their behavior towards each other is just fun all the time. Besides that, Lena is adorable. I think I love her. ...

This is late! But I swear I read this post a while ago! I'm here now though, hehe. Okay. So, the beginning conversation with James and Luke was classic. I ...