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Cold winds attacked her in all directions as she made a slow attempt to get home. Her long, brown hair whipped around and hit her face. She wished that she ...

CHAPTER 1 It had all begun that summer. Looking back now, I realize how young and naive I was, but how was I supposed to know what was to become ...

Rick, everyone knows the truth so stop being so modest and admit that you're awesomer!!! *shows fangs*

Day 1. 7:15 pm. Adara. My eyes opened and I looked around. Must have dozed off for a while, I thought irritably. I yawned feeling plenty rested and looked to ...

You accidently posted two of these, both containing the exact same thing, so I deleted the other one. I'll send it to you just in case it was important. Things ...

I can't really tell what this is about. It just focuses so much on the movements and positions of your characters that it doesn't really tell a story and I ...

XD I know. But I'm on a serious sugar high so since one word was already wrong I decided to play it off as a joke and make them both ...

Rick would like to know who is awesomer. Me or him. ;) And we all know the answer to that...don't we? (Pick him) :) Okay, so pick whomever you wish.

First of all, great idea in getting all of your information down first. I like the different species that you used and how you described each one. My favorite were ...

I can’t believe that I’ve actually been here for a year. I would say that it seemed like I just joined yesterday, but to tell the truth, with all the ...

*thumbs up* I really like this idea! :)

Day 1. 6:15 pm. Adara. I opened my eyes having been in a semi-sleeping state for a while. I looked around me surprised. For once there wasn't anyone around me. ...

I like how this starts off. All action. I liked the third one the best. It reminded me of Ch. the most for some reason. I can already tell this ...

B-b-but I thought Kit was mine! :(