Riedawriter23

I rated this R because, eventually, most likely very soon, this will be R material so it's a warning. :) ----------------------- The chicken was judging me. It’s beady eyes boring ...

XD I can't help myself, she just won't leave me alone! ;) *bites back*

Username:76% Custom Title: None Avatar: 100% (I love him!) Country: 80% (At first I thought it said Netherlands and I was gonna give you 100% but Peter Pan makes me ...

Linds and Rick! Rieda and Linds! Rieda and "Greg". My homie G hippo. Rieda and Donoism! :) and...heck why not... Rieda and YWS! So that means I'm officially First Name: ...

Okay, what I was trying to say was while she's in this beautiful place she's still waiting for this guy to come and...seduce? I don't really want to use that ...

My waterfalls, My dripping, lazily In a forest of cumquat trees. Lips moist with anticipation. Waiting for the arrival of your Poetic tongue. Starving for a string of words To ...

The first thing that I noticed was that it felt like you were talking moreso than the words flowing. Instead try to show us what you're talking about. Also, as ...

Listening. To the pounding of the music As it takes its final climax, Breathing. In… Erotic, seemingly flamboyant Patterns. Ice skating between my lips And melting in your button-holes. Smoke. ...

I loved it! XDXD *still laughing* Brilliant Mesh! Yay for Donoism! ...I wanna hear Dono sing. :(

Okay. Yes. It is true what the other have said. But I really want to rewrite this just to see what it looks like and then correct it? I'm sure ...

First thing first, you need punctuation. Right in the beginning I was gasping for breath. Just to make the overall poem flow better, you have to have more than just ...

XD *gasp* Butter! ...it's okay, I know that Rick paid you to vote for me. Just like he did to you all! Everyone knows the REAL truth. So, Rick, I ...

Rain Dancers in a pool of echoed water waves. Splashing, splashing, ricocheting beats in bubbled caves. Drumming, pulsing, swaying, bursting, lolling all around. Feet are tapping, rythyms lapping, hea

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Welcome to the Discussion Thread To start us off: Does anyone have any reviews they think should go in the Star Review thread or have any questions?