Riedawriter23

I’m…good. Tell me that you love me and I’ll Say I love you too. Tell me that it’s over and The relationship is through. You’re broke and I get the ...

Firstly, Welcome to YWS! :) Now for the critique. The first thing that I noticed what that you had absolutely no format. You must have at least some flow and ...

Our first model review. :) By: Jabber Subject: Fantasy Fiction Notice how detailed she is! Great job Jabbs! *claps* Hello! Here to critique upon request and desire. ^_^ Quote: The ...

The Earth is small, with big mistakes. Filling minds with no breaks. Anxiety takes over, Crushes the mind. Making you feel, Like you're left behind.

I agree with the above comments. It's a good idea, but it's been done too many times before. Add yourself into it. We want to know what you feel, not ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! :) Checking out of routine I postpone the hour to dream. **I don't think that this was forced. It looks like is should be but once ...

Hello! :) I'm going to review this with Via's punctuation corrections to make it easier. Don't you realize you're my hero? Can't you see why I love you so? **These ...

This was good...though we actually do have a song lyrics forum here and that's where this poem belongs. The rating is G. I'll contact a poetry mod for you so ...

Welcome to YWS! :) Okay, the first think I realized about this poem is that...though the contents suggest dramatic poetry the whole style and flow say lyric poetry. I was ...

I actually like your choppy style. I get a lot of different emotions from this and even though I have to reread it to interpret what it almost seems right ...

Hello welcome to the site! :) I thought your english was pretty good. The poem was wonderful, especially the ending. I'll make corrections as needed: Could you hear the voice ...

I'm explaining actual events of her life. The first extremely violent act that Elizabeth Bathory actually saw was her father and a doctor putting a grown man in the stomach ...

The chicken was judging me…again. Except now, it smoked and sizzled in a silver platter at the center of our grand table. It should have smelled delicious to me, but ...

Stephanie Meyer is like my favorite author! I didn't realize that the story I was trying to portray was like that of Twilight until now...or more so like eclipse I ...

XDXDXD I still find this incredibly hilarious! Butter, you're wierd. ;) But, awesome as always! *high fives* ~Rieda