Rheassa

I didn't have much tim before, but I can write a bit more now. Yup, she is not human. I had to look up what Mary Sue is, since I ...

Thanks a lot XD I already got some criticism i previous comments, it's good to hear some "Well done." XD I'll try to adjust the text and then edit it. ...

I think I wrote in description that English wasn't my mother tongue, but anyway, thank you for advice, I'll think it through and make some changes. It's not the whole ...

Thanks!!! My English is so far from being perfect it's almost hilarious XD I'll work on detailes, hopefully it'll be something worth reading later XD