Revolutionary

Silly google ads... Why must they eat sudoku links? Does anyone know how to get to sudoku now? I serously can't figure out how to get to it with that ...

Ah, I see... I can't wait to read more! Rev

Very interesting! Your writing style and voice fit the story nicely. I just have one question, why would the guards be patrolling the slums if they were going to be ...

Wow. Very interesting read. Is Ana an abbreviated form of Anaya? Claraification on that would help, if so. Also, did you mean to switch into first person here: "I giggled. ...