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  • Art & Photography Re: Lake District summer

    Hi! Great photo! I especially love the colors. Together they look so strange but it works well. It almost looks like a painting. The mountain reminds me of my own ...

    Jun 29, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Text Picture: A Wolf Pawprint Made Only From Keyboard Symbol

    Not bad! I know it's not easy to make these. The center of the paw (the biggest part) seems a little off. Maybe it's too wide...?

    Jun 29, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Billy Mays found dead in his home

    I can't believe he died. So weird...

    Jun 29, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I Am

    Hi! I like your poem, but it needs some work. You could use a bit of organizing. Is your first line the title or part of the poem? You spaced ...

    Jun 29, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Greetings?

    Thanks for the warm welcomes. I like to write pretty much anything, but I especially like fantasy. I don't have much of a favorite author. Or a favorite book. :?

    Jun 29, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Clouded Gem

    Wow! This poem is great. It flows nicely, and there is a lot of emotion. Readiant colours. Maybe did you mean radiant?

    Jun 29, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: (Oh-so-short) Preface of my untitled novel.

    Great job! Your first line is a great hook. Can't wait to read what happens next. Wish I could say more but Basket really said it all for me. And ...

    Jun 29, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Greetings?

    So... I'm new here and not quite sure what to say. I've been writing and re-writing this introduction and it still dissatisfies me. I don't think I've ever been quite ...

    Jun 29, 2009


It is not enough to do your best; you must know what to do, and THEN do your best.
— W. Edwards Deming