RepublicOfCoter

also guns can get quite loud and he would want fight a massive army and probably die. seriously who would go behind enemy lines and fire, get caught and die ...

Hey everyone! Thank you for your wonderful reviews! I do apologize but I did think that all my lines followed the 5,7,5 syllable rules. Unfortunately, as many of you have ...

watchmeburn, I am totally agreeing with RedLeaf's comments full stop. MWAHAHAHA! -R.O.C.

I forgot to mention in my review that you were my 75th review which earned my my third gold star! Thank you for giving me that opportunity! -ROC

I've heard that a lot of you say that 'deafened' is a harsh word to use in that particular section, but that's the point. There are so many stars that ...

Yep, you're right rubberduck, with your comment on the last stanza. What I am trying to say here is that this person loves the night sky and hates the day ...

Thank you HorseradishCares, I am currently taking on the challenge to create a new unique phrase which is quite a difficult job without help. All I have right now is: ...

Hey, thanks for the help. Just so you know, I wrote this poem about a girl. Try look at it that way. I just wanted to see what people thought ...