Reonblade

Chapter 3 Rael was close now he could feel the magic thickening as he neared the mage city Serenity. He never liked the area, it was too peaceful and without ...

Heya! I was reading this and was surprised that the more i read the more i came to like it! At the beginning I did not like Riley all that ...

Chapter 2 Seth looked at the bright sunshine from the treetops and thought hard about his next action. He would train Elina as best as he could, then he would ...

Heya! I really like the story so far! I do agree with some of the past comments, it lacks some of the necessary descriptions, like what the seashell looked like, ...

I think this is a great start to a potentially deep novel! The 'Him' I thought was quite well done, it is a clear distinction from the psychologically impaired 'Her,' ...

Thank you all who reviewed! I have made some quite drastic changes in light of what has been said :P Chapter 1 “Who are you?” Elina shouted at the figure. ...