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Re: By Day's End.
Wow.... I like it! But since you asked for harsh critiques, capitalize?
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: Perseverance (chapter one)
Thank you for the input, it is my first attempt at sci fi and I expected no less than a little general.
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: What Happened
I liked the unconventional way of poetry, it is a cool way of leaving it an open ending. Maybe have more of an explanation throughout the middle of it? Food ...
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: The Black Rose
I really enjoyed this chapter, it is eerie and very descriptive. But I believe that more dialog might spice it up a bit. :)
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: Knight in the Night
I found this poem truly remarkable. I love it! You have a marvelous gift.
Dec 18, 2010