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Re: Red Anger
Red is of fiery hells Should 'hells' be plural? In this instance I think it might not work. Etirnity of anger welled up inside It is spelled 'eternity', and I ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Dark Sister
Amazing...! I couldn't help but be floored by the imagery. We shall intertwine our hearts, Very sweet, couldn't help but imagine the hearts with wings though, but that seems a ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Will never lasts forever
This was really deep and I couldn't help but relate to this, especially the segment How could you Do this to me Selling all my secrets That I've only told ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Dear _ _ _ _ _ _
The unique way of poetry really brought out a different wave of emotions, I think you should continue with this prose. This is really very good, and I loved the ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: I am Just Another Teenager
This is really good for being written at 3 AM :) All I have to edit is a know it all, could care less, chick with a chip on her ...
Dec 20, 2010