Rena_Luvs_All

everything of yours that i read is great. this is perfect.

2 words. it sucked. sorry. i just think it could have been a hundred and ninty-nine percent better.

Lookin Back On My Life, I Gotta Ask, Were My Choices Right? The Decisions Too. If I Could Go Back, Change It All, You Think I Should? I Guess I ...

The amount of pills I'm taking, counteracts the booze I'm drinking, and this vanity I'm breaking, lets me live my life like this. Well I'll choose the life I've taken, ...

Cute but....Not Good. Try working On it.alot.

I'm sitting at my computer. I type a line, then I rest my hand on the backspace until all letters are off the screen. A poem, a story, a song, ...

It was a slow day. A small shop in the middle of a small town. I guess nobody was going out for the rain and fog was so thick you ...

Im RENA! not new anymore but....hi!

I Loved Old Time Fish. But Step Up and In Memoriam were beautiful. I Loved them. I Take pics of nature.

Wow. I Really Liked It. But Certain parts could have had a little more detail. Even though I sorta just pieced it together in my head. like when they were ...

Yes, we all do it. Something that comes naturally with life. Hard to escape, for you are easily captured. We all hate it. Feels wrong, we know that it is. ...

GOOD! but it kinda stuck out to me how you used "plagued" in the 4th and 6th stanza. other then that it was quick and to the point. GOOD.GOOD.GOOD.

All I want is to be wanted. All I need is to be needed. What I see in you is exactly what I want. What I see in you is ...

Always on my mind. In the middle of the night I dream of you touching me deep below the surface. I want you around at every second of the day. ...

Hi Neena! I love your name by the way! I'm Rena and I hope you enjoy YWS! I'm basically new too! I love writing songs too. If you have any ...