Rena0421

thanks. haha, like i said, written in less than three minutes. so thanks anyways. i'll take it all into consideration:)

I like it. It isn't too emo bit I think you have it in you. haha. Good poem, I liked the formate but who knows, it's 5 in the morning ...

Awww. That's too funy. Where are you going but only for a week? And only to return and see us all in hell? That was cute, too. Haha, keep up ...

*brava*brava* Good Poem. That is all I can truly say now. Keep up the good work. No Critique.

Oh, I just noticed that you were a new member. Welcome. Actually, I'm a new member as well. And I am sure you've heard the rules a great number of ...

Gracias, Senorita. I took it all into consideration.

Nice. I like how you had no punctuation. Made it an even better poem.

I understand Greek Mythology perfectly and this story was...interesting. Very detailed, I must say. You did a good job writing it, too. Keep up the good work. Haha, I want ...

I would only take the 'but' out of the last sentence. But it was good besides that one thing.

I like it. But what are they changing into? I want to read more. It's interesting.

You wrote it three years ago? So you were probably around eleven or so? It's good for an eleven year old. Nice work.

This Lulllaby by Sarah Dessen. It could be classified as a romace. It had a love interest or two. And it is one of my favorites. If that counts for ...

Nice, to the point but a few spelling errors which were pointed out by the person before me so no need to get into any gritty details. I liked it. ...