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Re: Dark Intrigue
Thanks for the critique it really helps. Yea Im not a huge fan of this draft either. I'm working on another at the moment and I'm hoping it turns out ...
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Re: How Long Can YOU Cheat Death w/ Thirteen Days Till Midnight
How Long Can YOU Cheat Death with Thirteen Days Till Midnight? A Book Review by RenGrey What would you do if you had the ability to be immortal and invulnerable? ...
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Re: Moonlight Fire
I really liked this. The vampires seem so realistic and not overly exaggerated or godlike. The names are unique and I really liked the ending. I don't know whether its ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: Moonlight Fire
I really liked this. The vampires seem so realistic and not overly exaggerated or godlike. The names are unique and I really liked the ending. I don't know whether its ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: First Light - Chapter One
OK first off the title alone drew me in. Secondly IT WAS REFRIGERATINGLY brilliant! Once i finished reading I couldn't wait for more. my god that is better then some ...
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Re: Prisoner
I liked it though it seemed a little broken up the way you had the formatting of the lines. Very good all the way though. I t was like I ...
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Re: Dark Intrigue
Epilogue London, England 1886 The room was dark and the pouring rain could be heard tapping loudly on the walls and the single, large window behind the woman in the ...
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