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Brilliant once again. God I love this so much. Haha yes I lied and I decided I'd read one paragraph and well haha I made it through the entire page. ...

Brilliant Mate! Read it in under a minute. I just cant get over how good and entrancing your writing is. Whenever I finish reading an installment or chapter im hungry ...

Jp, I really enjoyed your review. It was solid and stayed brilliant beginning to end. It was brief and humorous in the beginning and stated reasons WHY the movie was ...

Thanks you so much Butterfly18 I will take you up on your offer. Same to you JP. I really appreciate it

HAHA well thank you very much. I am going to try and add a little more structure. But it may turn into something like my family yoga...o.o everyone was asleep ...

Thanks for all of your help. lol and to be honest I don't really have any structure. I have tried making an organizer at the belonging of every chapter (which ...

Thanks JP I appreciate it!

I truly enjoyed reading this. It was fast paced and descriptive. When you described the fire I could smell it, and taste it, and see it curling up into the ...

The title alone drew me in. By the first sentence? You had me hooked for life. This seems like it would be a brilliant book. I love the nickname that ...

Ok this was hilarious and made me laugh out loud. It was parodious but it made a lot of sense if this was an entire book I would read it ...

No no. Don't worry. I rather like your corrections and pointers. It's glad to see someone else's perspective besides friends I go to school with (not that you wouldn't be ...

I like superheroes and comic books so this was immediately intriguing for me. I liked it and the twist you have on it. I would read another installment or chapter. ...

I love fresh take on vampires. It was humorous and I over how it wasn't too glamoured. I would lokke to read this if it was an entire book. The ...

To both of you thanks for your comments. This is a book review for a book called Thirteen Days till Midnight. by Patrick Carman. you can google it. i assume ...

Thank you sooooooo much! And yes I meant prolouge. Haha. Yes this draft I didn't like very much. I will probably be posting the new version soon. Been doing this ...