RenGrey

I love your humor and witt :) keep at it, this made me laugh really hard. Loves the color change in the text by the way as it progressed. Perfect ...

Thanks you Al :)

Thank you for your kind words. I did not find them harsh at all. More encouraging and constructive criticism would be the proper words :) I'm glad my poem enhanced ...

Sorry about the terrible spellings. I should revise over it sometime soon. The spell checking capabilities on my I pad are not nearly, half as good as those as my ...

As always it was, thank you again Butterfly four immensely helpful commentary and reviews

Thank you :) *sheepish shrug* I use my extensive vocabulary in casual conversations. It's just the way I am, I appreciate your review and for pointing out the grammatical errors. ...

:D I take your dare! :) thank you for your understanding and your strategic commentary to help it become more clear. Thank you for your time, RenGrey

I really enjoyed this. The eyes were brilliantly drawn. I really appreciated this since I have just started getting into manga and anime. I think youbdid everything really lovely except ...

Thank you Rose, There was no way I could have taken it harshly. I appreciate your words of advice, I don't see it as harsh only..sternly concerned. I will get ...

Thank you for your kind words

By the way Rachel, it his a carnival/fair so they have booths with games and tellers... She gets shoved from outside into the tent

I appreciate your commentary and advice. I will follow through upon it.

Thank you very much. I will be sure to do that as soon as possible.

Chapter One The October air griped me in an inescapable bear hug. My bare arms and fingers tingled and prickles with goose bumps with the lowering temperatures. Despite the low ...

I'm rather curious about the tree and the backdrop, I rather enjoyed them